Group: Feedback On Rough Cut

Group: Feedback on Rough Cut:

• After screening our Rough Cut of the opening to our target audience, we received many positive remarks regarding the footage. This included:
• The variety of shots were good
• The camera movements were effective
• The pull focus and slow motion shots were good
• The concept was good
• We also received constructive feedback from the target audience regarding areas of which could be improved. This included:
• Could have improved the sharpness of the shots
• Could include a faster cutting rate in order to create tension and a build up for a climax.
• Could include closer shots of writing
• In response to this feedback the sharpness of shots was mainly targeted at the slow motion which cannot be edited, however regarding a higher cutting rate as our rough cut only incorporated a minimal amount of our total footage, we can then include more shots to reinforce the plot and to increase the cutting rate for tension.
• Furthermore, we could also use extra footage or the crop tool in order to add closer shots to improve the variety. In addition to this title shots must also be added in at a later stage as well as a fitting soundtrack.